[Accepted] Shknifer's Child Auth app. *had to start over because fucking refresh button*

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    [Accepted] Shknifer's Child Auth app. *had to start over because fucking refresh button*

    Post by the shknifer on Mon Sep 15, 2014 8:17 pm

    Steam Name:The Shknifer

    Steam ID:STEAM_0:0:39712614

    How long have you been roleplaying?:2-3 days great server!

    Any experience having this auth before? Yes, I did. On another server called "Medieval Rp" I don't recall the name. Memories...

    What are you applying for?: Child auth.

    Why should you have this?: I am a great, role player, I know what I'm doing and I'm clearly going to be a good char if you let me have this auth, I know that there is a lot of childs but, it not about how much we need, it about how much are good roleplayers.

    Backstory:

    (had to start over fucking refresh button I had like 5 paragraphes)

    *Quick resume of what I had to start over*
    Two young adults loved eachoter, they wanted to make a kid. Few months later the child was born. Called Elissa Benneth. Mom was killed of when she was 2 years old, by werewolves. Dad, was killed off by a vampire on a building when she was only 8 years old.


    *Let's do our best after this, since I wasn't advanced after that.*

    The poor girl, scared and sad. She was all alone for this remaining year before the present of time. She walked on the streets like a homeless guy, witch nothing do at all. She found her home by chance. She entered it by the window taking all the goods she had, she all put these together in her backpack. a water bottle, some photos, a lighter, a sleeping bag and finally some food left in it. She met some friendly guys on the street too.



         1 years later, almost back to present. She had 9 years old. She lived through one year by herself without any help. It was hard for her, it was like a sad experienced that you cannot exit, full-depression and fully-shy. She wasn't born shy but she became shy because of the tragic events. She only remembers how his dad died, not her mom. She was too young to remember. The poor girl roamed the streets for food in hope for some survival guess. But not findings. She went to the restaurent near where his memories left her. She gained herself some free burgers from the owner. He was a close friend to her dad. He offered her a shelter which she happily accepted the offer. But the guy didn't last long before he was ripped apart in his own food serving stand. All because of a fight. To prove who is the stronger the others, to prove who is worth it and not worth it. She just kept her eyes closed... she didn't want this to enter her life.... this is as it now... as tragic as ever.....






        (I'm sorry if it isn't long. But I don't want to fucking redo the previous fucking 4 paragraphes. Oh fucking fine there you go but it not really long. Small paragraphes but worth it unlike that other Crappy shit.)



      Elissa Benneth, she is told to be blonde, she is described to have magnificent Sky looking... Blue eyes....
    but it is not the description which is important, it his the story, her story. She was born in ... 2016 -9 = 2007....? Let's redo that. She was born in 2007... People didn't believe in that urbans legends as of today, now they fuckin do.. 
      

    (In this first paragraphe just so you can understand, it 2006 September 1st)



       Two young adults were good friends, they were called, Bianca Benneth, and Brian Benneth. They were the good pair. No one would ever be able to make them hate themselves... always the water and the plant.... but when they camed to a disagree on something... world war 3 is declared... tables, chairs, furnitures. All going in the air and destroyed on the impact...... what a fucking waste! Wait let's just stop for a moment myself I can't afford me shit BUT WHY DESTROY YOURS...... URGH!.... Let's continue... They wanted to be more then friends, they wanted to have a good relationship more then just small friends...



      Few months later, they had their baby ready to be born. They took good care of it like it was their life. Everyone who would stand in their path would die obviously... When the child was born, the mom had to stay some days more then the child itself... She got an infection while the child was born'.



    *Let me copy this fucking text so I don't loose it again.... Done... let's continue*



    When the mom came back from the hospital they were a happy familly. They promised on their life that they will correctly educate that kid. Even if one of them perished or falled in deep deep depression. Never they would abandon the child.






     2 Years Later, They want to vacation at the beach, not far from ottawa since they were at Canada before that event happened. The mom was preparing the tent when some gang of wolves told her to come but... it was full moon tonight and the other pair had to wait until they saw the mom crawling towards them...


        Few months later, the dad was in a very deep deep depression for long.... long until his death that will be told among us later...
      

        They had to move on life... He went back to his native town. In the United-States, at Las Angelos. They had a good life... for 5 more years until this event came along... The dad went to shopping while her daughter was getting kidnapped on the alley. He happened to go on the same alley. They had a huge fight. The vampire versus the ragefull dad. They had the epic dead fight ultimate utterly awesome. They bringed it towards the mall were they had the last stand.. His friends came and pushed the dad over the ledge... he was then seen hanging on a pole who gone through his chestplate... it was the flag of the decor of a restaurent....







    Thanks for taking the time reading my reposting of my app. It means alot for me... I worked hard on the previous one so it may be not the best app but, its something better then nothing. So I hope you can understand that I had to do it all over again.... thank you... for giving your opinion... If I missed any grammar/ponctuation, errors. Tell me, it will help me get better in English. I am french origin and I'm only 13 years old. I'm trying my best....


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    Re: [Accepted] Shknifer's Child Auth app. *had to start over because fucking refresh button*

    Post by Asiimov on Mon Sep 15, 2014 8:28 pm

    french people are cute
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    Re: [Accepted] Shknifer's Child Auth app. *had to start over because fucking refresh button*

    Post by Pixie Replacement on Mon Sep 15, 2014 8:32 pm

    It's okay, aside from some grammar mistakes and whatnot, but not your first language, so it's ACCEPTED


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